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MY ATTEMPT AT A POEM...read if your bored =)

I had to write a poem for english and it had to have all these random poetry techniques in it...
I based my LOOSELY on Alice in Wonderland

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Fallen for the king of hearts
My minds a mess
Who stole my tarts?
Theres nothing left
but smiling cats
Talking rats
and funny hats

Down the rabbit hole
your falling
LOST IN LULLABIES
Dear Hatter is calling
OFF WITH HER HEAD!
Her screams are heard
How did my days get so blurred?

Slay my impossibilities
YOU ARE MY WONDERLAND
**

sapphire007 posted over a year ago

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kissxmexgoodbye said:

I think that your poem is good. I like it.
I must say that my first poems weren't as good as my last ones and I think that, if you continue writing, you'll write good poems.