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What did you think of my story so far, if you liked it tell me and if you didnt like it tell me and if you think i should continue to keep writing it up here for you to read tell me that too, its always good to hear from others.

Melrose Bennet is a 16 year old girl who lives in Florence, Oregon. She is the best runner on the school track team and while she isnt as good at paying attention in school she makes up for it by passing never the less. She lives with her parents and one brother who is the all star at everything in school, Tyler. The summer approaches and Melrose is one of those girls who dont really think that much about guys and romance she actually dispises the PDA community.
She decides to get a job over the summer at an ice cream shop just down the street from a photoshop where she meets Kent. Kent is 3 years older than Melrose and not really someone she see's herself liking in any way. She hates him immediately and the more she does the more Kent finds it hard to ignore her or stay away from her, though he shouldnt be with her in the first place he finds himself compelled with her soul and Melrose may just find true love but she's not sure she wants it, not over the summer, not ever. Deep secrets are unraveled and the Paper kisses really do cut deep.
What did you think of my story so far, if you liked it tell me and if you didnt like it tell me and if you think i should continue to keep writing it up here for you to read tell me that too, its always good to hear from others.
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ii love that name... Melrose.... very pretty.
annalia posted over a year ago
 fire_ice posted over a year ago
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kuykendall said:
I liked the what I seen as a summary, but it does seem familiar, I'm not exactly familiar with Twilight so I'm not making that sort of simlilarity. If you wanna make a book that you think people will read then that might be a good choice if you think that you sounded a bit like you were repeating something, then it did sort of seem like it. I do however think you'd be a very good writer just pull your ideas from more than one genre then put them together because if you pull it from just one then it could get boring. That is all! I hope I helped. :)
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Night-Sky said:
Hmm...I'm not entierly sure...
It seems kind of...familliar...
What genre is it?
"Paper kisses really do cut deep." oh, I like that line!
But, to be entierly honest, I'm very sorry but it sounds a little bit like Twilight.
I think maybe you have ripped the idea off a little bit without meaning to. Very sorry! Please don't hate me!!!
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MadamOcta13 said:
I don't really get the whole "compelled with her soul" thing. It sounds kind of cheesy. Does it have any conflict? Because it doesn't sound too interesting at the moment.
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edward-lover456 said:
Yes... awesome story I want the links to them please!!!
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Heya said:
It goes too fast...sorry. So you won't feel bad, I am a fan of you!
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cloudcastle said:

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Hello fire_ice . . .

Maybe the following could help . . .

1 fair.

2 like.

3 love.

4 lust.

5 hate.

Perhaps to guide from number 5 to 1.

Story could have a happy ending.

Hope you have a happy Thursday.

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