Here's a random poem i wrote just tell me if you like it ok? - Creative Outlet

Creative Outlet Here's a random poem i wrote just tell me if you like it ok?

jacob4ever57 posted on Feb 21, 2009 at 08:36PM

Ok i'm kinda new to writing poetry so this might not be the best...

Dreams

A dream is something that can't be seen
A dream is something that may not have meaning
But a dream is magic all the same
No matter how horrible or tame

A dream is enchanting to all
A dream can be about anything at all
Love, play, fights, or fears
A dream is something to keep close and near

So keep your dreams close to your heart
And don't let anyone tear them apart.

hehe yea kinda new just tell me whatcha think.

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over a year ago raknaff said…

I thought it was really cute! I love it!

over a year ago Ovybo said…

I loved it! I don't think you should rhyme all with all in the 2nd paragragh though. Maybe you could put "A dream can stand tall" if you wan't to listen to me.