ok. it says i posted at 1 oclock in the morning but actually i posted at 7 oclock at night

Hi guys here is the first couple sentences to my story.

"A note for me?"

Prolouge

"Well it has your name on it." Hermes repies to my idiotic question. This time he was disguised as a secretary just doing his "business".

Of course Martha and George were with him.

Hey, have you ever heard of a rat, because I really like...

George would just shut up and stop bothering her, Martha pleaded.

But I'm hungry!, George complained.

"Would you guys please be quiet?!" Hermes asked while he looked down at his efficiant clip board. I couldn't help but to stare at his fancy outfit. And his striped tie and his leather shoes and his... ok I'm getting off topic.

"Here", Hermes finally found a pink silk rather small envelope that was sealed quite tightly. He handed it to me like someone would hand you their favorite peice of gum.

"Sometimes I wish I would get letters from somebody insted if delivering them and I wish..." then he trailed off into his sentence.

Anyways...

Farewell, Martha concluded totally inturupting George.

With that he vanished into thin air taking his snakes with him.

I glanced down at the envelope. Glittery silver ink wrote the letters C-O-U-R-T-N-E-Y. Courtney. Hmmm... who is that? Let me think... Who do you think it is? It's me!

I was right about to carefully open the letter when something awkward and strange happened. Something awakened me.

Pls reply and tell me if this is interesting. What do you think will happen next? Help me out. i love comments about my writing.
thx

In my last post when it says: " a note for me?" that should b after the word: prolouge. Sorry about that

In my last post when it says: " a note for me?" that should b after the word: prolouge. Sorry about that

Also when it says Hermes repies it's supposed to say: Hermes replies

My Story's Title: A Ligit and Epic Tale of a Girl Called Courtney.
Isnt it awsome!!!!! come on comment me!!! im not posting anymore till i get some comments!!! :( u guys look at it then leave.

you could just edit the story now post. plz thalia.
p.s. it feels wired calling you that
it is pronounced my way ha google it hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
i am waiting for u to post pacently









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Welll.... the End!!! jkjkjk

not funny boo. ha i called u emas name haha
post. seriously
p.s. like the monkey

Fine!!!!

Well... It's still Wednesday so I can still post.

Chapter UNO
(sorry I felt very Spanish for some reason today)

Disclaimer: I am not Rick riodan!!!

Claimed: I own this awesome novel. I made up almost all the characters to.

Chapter 1: The Pink Enevalope

Some thing pushed my eye lids open. I'm awake!

I know this is personal but to give you some info since it's summer it's extremely hot in the Hermes and all the other cabins. For that purpose I only wear a tank top and undies to bed just to let you know. I know you probaly didn't want to know that but it's important.

Then I realize how bad that sucks because I wouldn't have gotten that letter Hermes gave to me. Darn.

Now I see what woke me up.

It was absolute kayous (did I spell that right?) and I mean it! People were having pillow fights saying unnice things to each other and ocassionoly I would see a bra fly across the room. Very mature, I know right. I what a clue was going on until a loud voice thundered:

"I'm going to get you!!!"

But still that didn't fill me in.

"What is happening!!!???" I scream and hop out of bed almost hit my head on the top bunk.

Everyone, and I mean everyone, suddenly stared at me. You know I told something you probably didn't want to know think of that then think why everyone was glaring and pointing and facing their two little eyes at my body. Yah. Not pleasant and embarrassing.

I quickly turn around and scramble up a long blanket of mine and wrap it around my entire body. I bet 100 dollars my flesh turned to the color of a stop sign.

Blushing I ask again

The same loud voice answered, "We were bored and could not go back to sleep but.... Anyways.... It's time for breakfast let's go!!!"

Like a flock of birds flying south everyone skittered out the door. Everyone but me.

Obviously I need some bottoms. The shorts I wore from the day before were on the floor bit I decided to slip them on anyways I would change after breakfast.

And by the time I get done with breakfast I'll want my sunglasses, I thought.

If you know me you would know that I'm very prepared and think ahead.

I reach for my sunglasses on my night stand and see something else hanging out with it. A rather small pink envelope that was sealed quite tightly. Could it be? On the front of the envelope were the letters in glittery silver writing C-O-U-R-T-N-E-Y. Yes!! This is it.

I will read it at breakfast. I'm so excited!! Yeah!

I take the envelope and stick it in my shorts and place my gray strechy cami on top of it to cover it.

Wow. I almost forgot to put make-up on.

I have a little hanger thing that sticks to my bunk and it holds all my toiletries. Including my make-up. I smack on some lipstick and dot on a smidge of mascara.

I'm finally ready.

I open the Hermes cabin door and whisk in a breathe of fresh air as I head to breakfast and I am just seeing my cabin entering were we eat. So to catch up with them I am now skipping with my navy blue shorts right behind me.

CHAPTER 1. To be continued...
Duh duh dun

Sorry loony 4 Luna but I have to give this announcement ...


I shall not post on Saturday unless atleast five different people comment on me. Sorry I have to do this but I need comments. I want to know what u think!

sorry but i love how you copy the thingy i use at camp. hahahaha
and the undies thing is wiered

I know but it's important. I gives her an important excuse that NEEDS to happen later

When it says: now I relize how much that sucks cuz I woulnt have gotten that letter that Hermes gave me. Well if u haven't noticed since something made her awake that meant that Hermes thing was a dream. This reply is to all the people who didn't quite catch on to that.

Just to let u guys know. I have a new post time. Every Tuesday and/or Wednesday. Then every Saturday and/or Sunday I will post

Notice I said AND/OR that's because I might post Tues and Wed or just Tues. Vise versa. I might post Sat and Sun or just Sun. And again vise versa it depends if I have more to add the nxt day. Thank u for ur time.

dude over explaning and calm down i thought it was great. ccccccccccccccaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllll­lll­lmm­mmm­mmm­mmm­mmm­mm
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Seriously u had to put that.

Guys I mite post 2nite cuz SOMEBODY (aka loony4luna) wants me to.

Chapter 1 1/2
( Sorry last time I didn't want to post the whole chapter. So I will post another FULL chapter tomorrow as well)

An exception to the rule. Cuz SOMEONE (loony4luna) said she was gonna die if I didn't post so yeah. I'm posting on Friday how strange. 

Chapter 1 1/2

Oatmeal and rice cereal. Yuck!

So since I'm sitting in a chair (stating the obvious) at the cramped Hermes table I might as well open that pink envelope. 

I reach down and uncover it and removed it from my shorts. 

As I said it was sealed quite tightly when I tried to secretly open it it made a very loud farting noise. And after this morning I was not gonna be embarrassed again. So I guess I will after we go back into the cabin. 

Suddenly I hear like the most annoying voice. 
It's Jonathan from Ares. Most annoying kid ever!! And he's a Ginger so that makes it worse. 

"Courtney Mortisen flashed this morning!!"

Everyone laughed except me and my bff Izabelle. I assumes that I blushed. And my friend came to the rescue. 

"Shut up, and no she did not, you obese elephant butt!"

"Calm down!" Chiron warned

Everyone suddenly went silent, like ligit silent. 

"Kallie would you please stand up."

Kallie, a very muscular girl arose from the Apollo table. 

"This girl," Chiron continued, " preformed the best archery job that has happened in five years. Thank you Kallie."

Kallie's butt returned to the seat. 

"just wanted to say that. Breakfast is excused and..." 

Before Chiron could finish his sentence everyone was racing out the door and placing their plates onthe counter for the dish dutie. 


Back at my cabin I finally had the chance to read my letter. I oped the flap. It said:

Make sure no one sees you with this. 

When am I ever gonna have a chance open now?

Everyone its my sisters birthday wish her a happy 9th!

Well I've already written alot of chapter 2. And it's ma story. U don't like her but she just gets a little annoyed of u. After awhile she looks up to you and Courtney teaches u the lesson of accepting others friends and u see that Emilee is not so bad.

Chapter 2: A strange visit for a dumb reason.  

Disclaimer: Kay just to get this straight I'm not repeat I am not an awesome writer dude who writes awesome pj books. The original ones. 

Claimed: Kay I did create Courtney and Izabelle and Jonathan and Kallie and Bryan and Emilee...  Woops u haven't met them (Bryan & Emilee) yet. Well u will in this chapter. I'm a teen who has a terrific imagination just to make that clear. 

Chapter 2: A strange visit for a dumb reason

(Izabelle)

As my buddy and I trotted out of the cabin we saw my PERFECT "buddy" with her silk strawberry hair styled in a Hollywood bumpet. 

Sometimes I got jealous of her. She had time to do her hair and make up every morning. And several guys have asked her out  and she's only been her for a month! Geez. 

I was also so irritated cuz guess who's her mom. 

Aphrodite! No wonder she's good looking. The scene happened a few days ago. I wasn't there but Courtney told me that there was a red glowing heart over her head since Aphrodite is the god of love. 

And I was SO glad that she was claimed. I was rejoicing because she was moving OUT of the Hermes cabin.

Anyways she had her arms flying everywhere like a crazy maniac. 

Finally when she reached us she just stood there and stared... And panted. 

"Messed up your hair huh? Are you going to go cry now and go and fix it?" I asked. Because personally I don't really like her. I mean Courtney and her were like  pen pals or something before they came here at Camp Half-Blood. 

Then once they met each other and realised they were pen pals they freaked and spent the whole day together. And I just met Courtney when she came here. 

Courtney came about a year ago and I well came here about three years ago when I was 9 years. 

And I haven't been claimed thats why I'm in the rotten Hermes cabin. Grrr... 

"So Emilee why did you just go all spazy on us?" I ask cuz I like kind of want to know why she even bothered us in the first place. 

"Well... Like Apollo's sibling and her gang," when Emilee said gang she put quotations around it, "are a like staying for uh like visiting and it's so stupid"

"Just like you" I mummered  a little tiny bit to loudly. Apparently loud enough for Emilee to hear. 

She put her finger up, swayed her hips and protested,"Did you just insult me? I don't think so girlfriend. How dare you?" she gasped.

Gasp gasp. 

Tear tear. 

Kiss kiss hug hug night night nudge nudge bye bye. 

Sorry it's just one of those things that when you're friends with Courtney you sort of create. 

A little jingle for our friendship. 

"Like before I was interrupted," Emilee continued looking straight at me. "Well... Artemis..."

Courtney looked and her strangely then rudely interrupted, "Emilee! Sorry to interrupt but I have a question"

Emilee bounced up and down excitedly while questioning, "Whatever you question I will answer p. p.!"

Wait a minute did she just say pee pee?

"Why did you say pee pee? Do ya have to go? Because if you do you should leave."

Emilee looked at me as if my life was a total failure and all I was made of was pure stupidity, which my life isn't but hers is. Ok, just the second part. 

"Umm... If you were smart enough you would know that meant pen pal and you're not aloud to call her that."

Well Emilee if you were smart enough you would know BY NOW that I completely adore you. 

Error!!

My mistake I completely want you to never walk the earth after this day. Or at least be kicked out of Camp Half-Blood.     

"What was your question, COURTNEY?"

I could tell know that she was completely annoyed with me and I bet Courtney was a little too. So I decides to zip the lip until Emilee departed from us

"What was your question COURTNEY?"

Emilee's eyes were huge as she anticipated for her to answer. 

"Well um... Oh yeah! Why is Artemis and the hunters coming fir a visit?"

Emilee rolled her eyes, "I was about to say that before... Anyways she is coming to congratulate her half-niece. She is very proud of her for being Achiever in archery for the year of the Apollos. Kallie Kallie Kallie always an over achiever. And well Chiron said the hunters hadn't visited for a long time as well. Pretty dumb reason huh? And now for the evening games- since it's a evening tradition when the Artemis peeps come- are playing capture the flag after supper. At least I don't have to participate and I won't." She crossed her hands and pouted. 

"Good-bye Courtney... And oh Izabelle"

"Hey, Izabelle can I talk to you?" 

I didn't answer because she dragged me to a clearing were no one else could see us. 


"I got this letter," she said looking down at a hot pink envelope. It was a little thing and we just glared down at it. 

I was waiting for her to say something. 

In the meantime we were surrounded by a ton of green leave covered trees. I'd seen the trees their beautiful leaves throughout the whole year since I am a year round unlike Courtney who leaves after summer is over. 

She finally opened the envelope which looked like it was already pre-opened. 

Then randomly shoved it my face. 

I read the flap:

Make sure no one sees you with this. 

"Hey, Courtney. Was this letter addressed to you?"

Courtney looked at the ground, "yes".

"Courtney I don't think I'm supposed to see this."

She suddenly looked up and yelled, "I don't know what it means you need to help me, I think I was..." 

"Shhhh... calm down girl. If it says no one is supposed to see this but you that means no one is supposed to see this! Stop yelling someone is going to hear us!"

Just then I heard crushing of sticks. One word: footsteps. 

"Nice job!" I whisper. 

Courtney looks at me and opens her mouth wide as to say: what did I do?

"I'll look what's going on."

I peek through the trees. People were running. I knew what that meant. Lunch time. 

I told her the news. 

"Lunch time."

I started skipping out of the tree covered area when I realised no one was behind me. 

"Aren't you coming?"

"In a little bit you go ahead", Courtney said softly still looking down at her envelope. 

I bet she was angry that I couldn't help her. She did that because when she is mad at me she doesn't have the heart to look at my face. 

Without replying I ran up the little curb of grass that lead to lunch.  

Chapter 3

Disclaimer: I think u no by now that I'm not a guy let alone the PJO writer

Claimed: don't want to list all of them. And since loony4luna took my character without ma permission I need another smart name besides bryan. Help me who ever can come up with the best smart boy name I'm gonna use that. 

Chapter 3: An interesting riddle. 

(Courtney)

Pshh... I'm not going to lunch. Is Izabelle gonna worry about me? 

Nah. I bet she thinks I just wanted some down time. 

But since she isn't gonna help me before I could tell her what this letter thing is all about I'm gonna have to go independent. 

I returned to the envelope and took the small slip out. No wonder the case was so little. 

I read it aloud to myself like I did before before Izzy and I went out of the cabin. 

"A super secret hide out
Is what this deal is all about
Go to the one which you think is better
Then you'll find another letter"

I think it's a riddle. But I wanted Izabelle's help cuz I don't get it. 

Well let's take it line by line. 

Line 1:
A super secret hide out

Well can't really say anything about that maybe it's supposed to mean something else in this clue. 

Line 2:
Is what this deal is all about

This supports the last line. This riddle is about a hide out. 

Line 3:
Go to the one you think is better

Well hide out. Go to the hide out that I think is the best. Which last year Izabelle and I found a very good climbing tree that we would look out from. 

Line 4:
Then you'll find another letter

Sweet!

There is the usual "hide out" which almost every demigod knows about. It's behind the Pegasus stables. 

One day a kid of Hephtus built a tree house hide out. First it was just for him and his friends. Then an outsider found it and practically spread the word to everybody. 

Eventually everyone started going there and hanging out there once and a while. It's cool because Mr. D and Chiron don't know of it yet. 

I spotted the tall thick-barked tree where Izzy and I used to joke around in. 

I stepped on the first ledge and grabbed the sappy branch. I successfully made it up the next to the next. It was like a spiral staircase but I didn't get dizzy. 

I went up until I couldn't any longer. 

Where was the letter?

First of all gotta get the thing that was stuck to my shoe before I slipped and broke every bone in my body. 

I lifted up my foot slowly but surely. 

Hey, problem solved! There it was a baby blue envelope addressed to me! Cool!

I was to excited I ripped it open regarding to keep the envelope because I like coloured envelopes. 

When I read it it was another riddle but I don't think this one was going to be so simple.  

Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Remember I'm having a contest for the best very intelligent boy name. Name on!

i think youre too much like apollo

O. Sorry

Post chapter 4 if 3 peeps tell me advice on ma story

er... why u not posting?

thalia is posting but on heros of olympus its called a ligit and epic tale of a girl called courtny

Yep I quit on this one.

Fine I'll post two chapters happy?

Chapter 4

Disclaimer: can you tell I'm a guy who has to shave his beard every so often? 

Claimed: Hey that name on contest- I started that!
The contest ends today. And today is Feb 20th. 

Chapter 4: Thats not a pencil

(Emilee)

I'm so glad lunch is over. I don't know what's up with these cooks but they're serving terrificul food today. 

For all you people who are unknown to man terrificul  is a combination of terrible fic and ul. What it means is that was totally beyond terrible. 

Like pretty and beautiful. If something is beyond pretty you would call it beautiful. See it has the ul on it. 

So back to life. 

I want you to get to know me because I absolutely hate it in books when you have a image of a character than the author like finally describes them and you can't get that image out of your head. 

And no one is allowed to get my image wrong. 

Here we go. 

First of all I have very neatly combed darkish strawberry brown hair and the most awesome bum pet ever. This epicly amazing hair doesn't go very far past my armpits. 

My eyes are solid beautiful brown but not the same colour as my hair. My dark eyelashes, my smooth skin, my perfectly skinny body are all feature of myself. 

Thats one reason I'm in Aphrodite. 

Fashion time. 

I'm wearing a light purple Aero tee and some pink short shorts. 

Enough about me, but there never can be enough of me can there?

Back to REAL life. 

After lunch had concluded "archery girl" went over to practice her archery. 

So being the sweet person I am I followed her. 

She was alone or though she thought so. 

She went over to the bench were she kept her bow. 

If you were wondering why she couldn't see me because I'm smart enough to hide behind the bushes. 

Poo. There goes a good hair day. 

She stepped up to the range with her bow. But where was her arrow?

She suddenly she dropped something and it went skidding to her right and rolled slowly down the slight slope. 

"Nuh, nuh, no!!" she dropped her bow and raced down. Kallie jumped over rocks though she wasn't very fast. 

I just realised what she dropped, it was a a pencil. A regular #2 golden pencil. 

She picked it up and raced back to the range as if she were limited on time. 

She put the pencil in her left hand and acted like the pencil was the arrow. 

Woah. It was the arrow. The pencil just like extended randomly and transformed into a radio active golden sharp tipped fine pointed arrow. 

Kallie mummers to herself then drew her arrow it looked like the arrow was made for perfect aiming. She released and and if she were competing she would of scored nine points. 

Then it hit me: Kallie used a magic arrow. I so wanted to yell: Cheater cheater pumpkin eater. But I decided I would tell on her secretly instead.