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What do you think of this poem?

The black rose describes him best.
Dark,just like his world is.
Dark,like his eyes.
But yet,you should take a good look before you touch it.
You may be hurt if you don’t watch closely.
Rose is so gentle,isn’t it?
So be careful,you might be hurt.
Careful what you wish,think twice first.
The petals are so soft and sensitive,you should know what you’re indulge.
The black rose is apart,she’s unique,just like he is...
Nobody can see the world he created.
He’s fearless,but he feels.
He’s cold,but he listens.
He’s mysterious,but caring.
He understands,but he no longer cares.
He’s empty,but awake.
He’s lonely,but he knows,without a goal you don’t live,
you just watch your life fading,without love you’re so empty,
without understanding,you’re still there,in the world of your own.

What do you think of this poem?
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I like it.
Mallory23 posted over a year ago
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Thank you. ♥
irena83 posted over a year ago
 irena83 posted over a year ago
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para-scence said:
that's really good! you got some talent! good job!
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posted over a year ago 
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Aw thank you. :)
irena83 posted over a year ago
Vixie79 said:
I still really love this one.
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:) Thank you honey. ♥
irena83 posted over a year ago
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You're welcome ♥
Vixie79 posted over a year ago
sonicgirls555 said:
wow you got talent my friend
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:)
irena83 posted over a year ago
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Thanks a lot. ♥
irena83 posted over a year ago
djsheshe said:
i really like this:D it means different things to me, but still paints a clear enough picture. really good. :P
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Thank you! :)
irena83 posted over a year ago
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u're welcome :P
djsheshe posted over a year ago
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