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My sad little poem... :'(

When I breathed, you breathed next to me
When I laughed, you laughed with me
When I smiled, you were the cause
When pain was the only option, you said there was love
When tears rolled down my cheeks, you wiped them away
When someone put me down, you told me you would kill them
When I was feeling down, you told me I was beautiful
When I said I loved you, you said, "Same goes to you."
When I cried, you wiped the tears away and held me close
When I needed protection, you were there

But now your gone
And you lied to my heart
You said that you would never break it
But you just did
However I'll always be there
Until death
Until the end of time
Until you realize what you lost
I love you...and will never stop
 ninjacupcake88 posted over a year ago
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liberiangirl_mj said:
your poem really touched me :(( it bringed tears in my eyes..
it showes that you're a sensitive person, very beautiful inside..
don't let anyone to take away your smile.. :)

lots of love!! ♥♥
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ninjacupcake88 posted over a year ago
ButteBaby_K said:
Beautiful. Whatever your going through I'm sorry. There was definitely a gem in the misery. "/
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