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Poetry Question

is this any good?

feeling so close when you're so far away

hoping you'll come back and ease my pain someday

i'm tired of this crap, "it's not you, it's me"

give me a break while i cry and plead

my stomach churns
anticipating your return

it's become so hard for me to talk
and let my feelings walk

everywhere i go
i want your smiling face to show up

letting me know you miss me so much

but that's never going to happen

because you've found someone'new while i've been away

and you were committed
you had said you would stay

and now you've left and gone away
leaving me here to sit and decay
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i dont have a title yet..thanks!!
emmyliz13 posted over a year ago
 emmyliz13 posted over a year ago
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rayray36 said:
I like wait no...love it but umm whatz the title? 4/5 starz
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posted over a year ago 
irena83 said:
Yeah,I like it,sad and deep as well. I'd like to suggest a tittle,it could be sadness or emptiness or even betrayal. Hope I've been helpful. ;)
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posted over a year ago 
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Really appreciate it...it's gonna be called...betray me...or betrayal...it's betrayal
emmyliz13 posted over a year ago
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