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Dose anyone have a tile sugestion and is this any good?

Have you ever been hurt by the one you love
Have you ever wanteed to change
Who you were, who you are, who you will be
Feeling as though your life is all laid out
Wondering why you have the life you have
You have it for a reason
Figure it out!

Have youo ever been hurt by the one one you love
Have you ever felt so betrayed
That you wanted to die
Don't give up
Things will change...for the best

Have yoou ever tired to change the world
With just a song
Try to change a heart just by saying "hello"

Have you ever though you had true love
Then found it in a total stranger
Have you ever had so much hate
Then saved a soul that was dying alone

All of us have in one way or another
Live life your way
The futures always changing








 MattxAliceNine posted over a year ago
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BittenGirl said:
wooow!that is amazing!you should write more poems because you are really good!
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posted over a year ago 
irena83 said:
It's a nice poem, emotional, partly dark but filled with a hope.
Suggestions for the tittle could be:
- Eternal struggle
- Pieces of living hope
- Wondering mind
;)
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