what do you think of my poem?

House of Clouds
Original by Elizabeth Browning. New by Elizabeth Nolan

I wish that I could keep my dreams
In a little house of clouds
Up high out of reach for anyone but me
I would cover it with shrouds
So no one can see
My little house of clouds but me.

Up higher then any building
It would tower above my head
Gleaming, shining, sparkling
A brilliant shade of red.
But even though it’s far I
Can still get to my little house of clouds.

Upon soft wings it floats in the night
And when it is day time
It will float in day light,
You might think this is crazy
But I’ll tell you it’s true
If you want I will give the secret to you

My little house of clouds is real you see
You can have one too
If you listen
For my little house of clouds
Is ME