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Please tell me whether this is a good poem or not!

"Best Friends"

There is nothing more important
Then friendship, you know
When you have a best friend
You learn to go with the flow

With friends you can be yourself
And never have to lie
Just chat and have fun
There is no need to be shy

So what I tell you now
Is what you need to know
Let it enter your mind
Love and kindness you will show.

The people out there,
There are only a few
But once you find your best friend
You know you can be you.

 s-jb123 posted over a year ago
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teamalecdemetri said:
i love it.......its REALLY good:)
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posted over a year ago 
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Thanks, I was thinking that it was really bad
s-jb123 posted over a year ago
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its not bad at all.
teamalecdemetri posted over a year ago
irena83 said:
It's very beautiful poem. ♥
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Thanks, I was doubting it
s-jb123 posted over a year ago
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;) You're welcome. Your writing is very good.
irena83 posted over a year ago
gir5136 said:
It's very good.
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RandomLuver said:
This is an amazing poem truly heartfelt and meaningful. And its true best freinds are a part of you.....
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Yell-0 said:
It is very well written and beautiful.
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LostFan101 said:
Nicee. Sounds like something i'd write. x] Its good :)
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noni4u2004 said:
very nice, awesome dear,its very touchy poem i like it,wish to write like this ,.best of luck.
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annabeth-crazed said:
i think it'd be a cool valentine to give a friend.in fact, can i use it for a valentine?

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and i do really like it!
annabeth-crazed posted over a year ago
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Hmm, I guess, I mean it's not like I would know anyway.
s-jb123 posted over a year ago
arcticflake said:
Wow I like it the only problem is I like deep dark mysterious poems
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upsidedown10 said:
It is a very cute poem! I really like the meter of it. keep it up!
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animegrl52p said:
I love it! Its great!
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crazy_moose said:
It's a very good poem indeed! I like the message of it and the rhythm rides along very well...

but, I'm not exactly sure if you meant to put it like this or not(it could even be just a typo x3) but I think the "then" in the line "Then friendship, you know" should be than. Just noticing that it wouldn't really fit well to put "then" there than "than". still, it's just my opinion, i could be wrong x3
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