Twilight Fanfiction New Story-All Human, What Do You Think?

xoxinkheartxox posted on Jun 14, 2009 at 01:31AM
ok so i suck at writing stories but this idea just came to me. Its only like a paragraph but i wanted to see what you thought. To see if i should try to turn it into a story. I DONT OWN TWILIGHT. This is rated T for mentions of rape.

Bellas Pov

I wanted to stand up to Mike.To tell him to shut up and that i was still a virgin, that all the rumors being spread wern't true.
That they were lies.
But i couldn't because they were true. I wasn't a virgin. I may not of had sex with Mike and it may of being forced on me, but that doesn't change the fact that i was no longer pure.
I was tainted.
last edited on Jun 14, 2009 at 06:43AM

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over a year ago xoxinkheartxox said…
idk? what do you think? i just thought id post it, to see what you thought?
over a year ago ctaim2 said…
Well you spelt virgin wrong....but it is intriguing. You might consider changing the rating to mature if you are including rape in this story.
over a year ago xoxinkheartxox said…
oops so i did,ill fix that lol. im not planning to go into to much detail about the actual rape, if i did continue
over a year ago brakingdawn said…
smile
Yea continue it sounds good