Okay i need more peoples stories????

I don't know if it's any good to you, but it's the description for the vampire in my story... hope it helps! Thank you!

    “Are you alright?” He asks. I dared to look up. Then, I wasn’t alright. No, I was far from alright. Because I think I just became the biggest hypocrite in the world. He was beautiful.
    He had skater blackish brown hair. It was straight, and directed to the right. He had Mediterranean eyes; blue, green, and yellowish but not grimy. Sparkling, as if they held the entire sea in them. He was paler than I, and often people confused me for ill with my dark circles under my eyes, my pastiness, frequent headaches, and hair which fell out. I insisted otherwise.
    He was definitely better than any model, definitely… flawless. My heart skipped a beat, and… even though I thought he was gorgeous, there was something else. He was… intriguing.